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My bones rattle
beneath the
hollowed ground
where my soul
rests in divinity;

Rib cage 
splits open
and butterflies
escape

What was once
beauty
is now
rust

Not even
turpentine
could wash
the past
away
For the Rust contest. [link]
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Thiiiisssss isssss sooooooo gooooooooood!
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Writer
Wonderful metaphor.
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remanth Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this. Its very descriptive
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