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Do not look at me;
I am covered in disgrace
Languid like the taste of your lungs
Your breath on mine,
Forevermore and forever always
Entangled fingertips, we are lost
Waiting for the clock to turn it's hands
Frozen in time until you return
Safe and sound into my arms
Until then we are nothing
But two people
With broken hearts.
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Azleah44 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I see... another very deep poem, humans cannot survive effectively without communication and love (but a few are exceptions).
The love one has becomes the most precious things of people, thus comes the terms soul mate, true love, and everlasting companion.
You cut the very essence of human nature, Grace. You must really be able to see into people quite well.
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NecromanticMinstrel Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
The taste of lungs? Interesting, off the cuff metaphor there. I enjoyed reading this, and would like to add it to my group, with your blessing. =)
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student General Artist
This is so pretty and sad. I love it.
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Student Writer
That is... really striking, just like your photos.
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TheGrimSurvivor Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
This is beautiful Grace. It is exactly of love and loss.  Well done :)
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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TheGrimSurvivor Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
My pleasure, glad you're back!
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